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| In The Absence Of My Flower Girl; a fledgling fanfic of mine | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 18 2006, 05:28 AM (1,208 Views) | |
| Sadhana | Jul 18 2006, 02:40 PM Post #16 |
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Oh em gee, everybody's so nice! :lol: Thank you, thank you, thank you so much, TS. What an ego boost. I'm so glad you liked it. You pretty much got everything I was trying to portray. Nice reading skills. Thanks again. I hope you like the ending.Snowyowl, I'm glad you also enjoyed it! I haven't written any other Clerith fics as of this moment. But I have a decent-lengthed oneshot brewing in my mind. So maybe if I find enough of a break from my novel, I'll try to type that out. Warning in advance though... I have the feeling it's going to be pretty angsty. Thanks for letting me know what you thought everybody.
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| ximio | Jul 27 2006, 11:10 PM Post #17 |
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Elmo and his friends =P
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OMG! I read the whole story and I liked it so much! Your a good writer! Loved it! I cried a few parts in the story (.......)
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| xClarexStrife | Jul 30 2006, 06:05 PM Post #18 |
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There's No Rock, Like J-Rock n__n~~
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LOL, i cried at tht. it was soooo sad! why doesn't cloud remember her in his dream thingy? but neway! i rly enjoyed it!
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| The_Lover_of_Aeris | Jul 30 2006, 06:59 PM Post #19 |
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Aeri-Cloud4eva
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I loved reading your fanfic I wish I could write like you I am lame at writing Hope everything go's well with your Novel. But I will try to Write a cute Cleris Fanfic You have inspired me in so may ways. If I need any help whould it be okay if I ask for help? with your writing it makes the scean so realistic. I actuly thought I was watching over Cloud and Aeris Thanks for inspiring me L.O.L
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| Sadhana | Jul 31 2006, 02:54 AM Post #20 |
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Thank you. It makes me happy to know that my story was enjoyed. And of course, I love feedback!
I would answer your question, but I don't know which part you're referring to. *spoilers for my story... so don't keep reading this unless you've already read my fic*During the actual timeline of the story, Cloud has two dreams of Aerith. In chapter 5, he dreams of when she died. In chapter 6, Aerith enters his dreams and talks to him. Both times, he definitely remembers her. If you're referring to chapter 4, Cloud isn't actually having a dream of Aerith... he's remembering a dream he had of her back during the timeline of the game. Part of what's bringing Cloud pain is that he has so many memories of her, but he wants her to be more than just a memory. The only part I can think of is back in the first chapter, when Cloud's in the church. After "confessing" to Aerith, he falls asleep while remembering the day he met her. Then it goes to a flashback on when they first met. If that's the part you're referring to, it was just a memory. And that was pretty much directly from the game. I just rewrote some of their lines. *end of spoilers*
First of all, thanks for the compliments and reading. I'm hoping my novel goes okay too (not so sure it will... but we'll see).If you want help, please don't hesitate to ask. I'm not the writing expert, but I'll try to offer any advice I can. I've grown to the level of writing I'm at-- just a note, I don't think I'm very good in case that sounded stuck up-- by asking my older brother (a published writer) questions all the time. And reading On Writing by Stephen King helped a lot too. I tried to make sure that the reader could visualize what was going on... so I guess it's a good thing you got that effect. And I guess... your welcome for the inspiration. Again, thanks so much everyone. Your feedback is much appreciated, and you've all been endlessly kind in your words of encouragement. I am, at the moment, working on a Clerith oneshot that takes place many years after Advent Children. I have about 1,000 words so far, but don't expect to see it until after some MAJOR editing.I can't say this enough... thank you! |
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| xClarexStrife | Jul 31 2006, 09:55 AM Post #21 |
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There's No Rock, Like J-Rock n__n~~
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LOL! i didn't no there were chapters... *thick clare* <_< im stoooopid! i'll go read the other chapters now! but i really enjoyed the first one neway! x |
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| Sadhana | Jul 31 2006, 05:29 PM Post #22 |
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Oh, okay! Yeah, there are six chapters. Just in case you don't know how to get the other five, there's a menu in the top right corner of the page with the first chapter. Just click on that, and it has all the chapters. Hope you like the rest of the story!
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| xClarexStrife | Jul 31 2006, 08:47 PM Post #23 |
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There's No Rock, Like J-Rock n__n~~
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omg... i red it all, n i cryed non-stop! it was so beautiful :) loved it! xx
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| Velut Luna | Aug 1 2006, 01:33 AM Post #24 |
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My destiny is in your hands
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So far im reading the first chapter and im liking it already :) |
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| Sadhana | Aug 1 2006, 05:01 PM Post #25 |
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xCxS: I'm glad you loved it! Yeah, there was a lot more than just that first chapter. ;) lenne: Awesome! Hope you enjoy the rest.
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| Alantie | Aug 1 2006, 05:35 PM Post #26 |
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Dreams the world far away
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I read this on FF before, but I didn't realize you were the author!!! It was simply one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read, and it made me cry You're a very talented Clerith writer!!
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| Trisse | Aug 12 2006, 11:31 PM Post #27 |
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After reading your other fanfic i had to read this one!!! i love it Sandahna! your a very talented writer! I loved everything about it! i was hooked on the first chapter! Kudos to your work! i want more hehehehe |
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| aerisbolt | Aug 13 2006, 04:59 PM Post #28 |
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Beautiful Paradox
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Sadhana, this was just an awesome fanfic, I abslolutely loved it. I feel like no matter what compliments I try to put here it would just be lame in comparison to your story but I will try anyway. I am with everyone else who commented. You are truly a gifted writer, you made my heart break for Cloud all over again, I, the reader was suffering right there with him. You captured both Cloud and Aeris so well. I cried too, it was so beautiful and your ending *Spoiler* It was one of the first to truly satisfy my wish for their reunion, I always felt that in some way even in fanfics I would be disappointed with the way it happened, but honestly it was amazing and just unbelievably romantic. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, just an amazing job.
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| Sadhana | Nov 2 2006, 01:32 AM Post #29 |
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Hey everyone! Just thought that I'd let the world know that I rewrote the last chapter of the story. Keep in mind, the actual storyline of it is still the same. But I made some major improvements in regards to how it was written. I realize that most people wouldn't notice these changes if I didn't mention it, but since they're a really big deal to me, I decided to let everyone know about it. :lol: |
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| Lute | Nov 14 2006, 06:16 AM Post #30 |
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OFFICIAL FORUM GODDESS
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Why, you snarky thing! xDDD *re-prints last chapter and keeps both editions* Amazing. I agree; the changes are astounding, and I have to say, your writing has gotten even better since the first publication.
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I'm so glad you liked it. You pretty much got everything I was trying to portray. Nice reading skills.
Thanks again. I hope you like the ending.



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I'm hoping my novel goes okay too (not so sure it will... but we'll see).
it was so beautiful :) loved it! xx

You're a very talented Clerith writer!! 
12:37 AM Jul 11