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| Cold Streets Poem; Written by me! | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 18 2006, 12:32 PM (133 Views) | |
| Abyss | Mar 18 2006, 12:32 PM Post #1 |
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~+Falling Forever+~
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Anyways this might remind some people of Cloud and Aerith but.. more I wanted to see what people think of it. I wrote it in 7th grade and trying to be better so comments/criticism would be helpful! Trotting down the frozen streets. The Moon illuminated the dark shadows. My hands feel cold as If I were griping onto Ice. She Turned and faced me, her soft hair gliding with her movements. Her blue angelic eyes drawn me from reality. All of my sense numbed by her beauty Only seeing her warm smile She grasped my hands, the frozen feeling drifted away. Her soft hands locked onto mine, it felt like my hands were being thawed from being frozen. My heart began beating as if it were a machine gun firing in my body. She leaned closer to me, my mind became a whirlwind, swirling with emotion and thoughts of what was happening. Confused as if I were a lost puppy looking for it’s mother, She was now barely touching me. With a motion she grasped me and I felt her warmth envelope my body. My heart flared into life, I could also feel her heart beating against mine even with through our layers of Clothing. Then to my surprise she closed her eyes and tilted her lips towards mine. Now I couldn’t even feel my own body, I leaned closer feeling her tender cheeks brushed against mine. Before we could meet, a violent burst shot me fatally back into reality, the cold smashing onto me as if I were ran over. She loosened her grip, planted a peck on my cheek then ran off into the darkness… ~Abyss |
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