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A New Fan Fiction Clorith Fan Fic; I wrote this and I am rather embarrased.
Topic Started: Feb 26 2006, 04:33 PM (662 Views)
Kit
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I just finished chapter 2 of a :cleris: fan fiction. It's drama/angst but the ending warms up. Tifa is not a negative character and Iflana is fairly important character. The summary on the site is... CloudxAerith Even after defeating Kadaj, Cloud still can't get over not saving Aerith. Ifalna is here to show him the truth. T for later violence, complicated situations, and language. Please take it easy on me. ^^ I'm not too good at this yet.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2818626/1/
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012607
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You might want to get that beta'd. For example, you're ignoring some basic language rules like a new paragraph each time a different person speaks.
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Meggie
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The first two Chapters are very good... :lmao:
Please continue you story :fangirl:
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Roseyrosho
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D: Oh my goodness I regret not reading this sooner!! :huggle: you left me open mouthed! it surely was an unexpected twist!

Please update soon!

oh and I left you a review and all but heh in case I got the lines right I just want you to keep going as intended just make it a happy cleris ending and ummmm..... maybe a baby Sora XD

but that's only if you want :) it's going amazingly so far and I dun wanna ruin it D:

again... can't wait for the update ^_^
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ladystrife
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All your Cloud belongs to me!!! (x)
OMG!! update seriously it is amazing i was soo in to it need to read more

please Wow! write more :huggle: :cleris:
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Dark Angel
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amazing stuff right there. and i know amazing cuz i love to write myslef. keep updating :)
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goddess_in_pink07
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Very good. I got a little tear-eyed toward the end, but..... snif.... i'm ok!
Please do wrote more.
I love writing fanfics like yours. I just love making my own happy or sad endings. :D
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Kit
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Thanks to all of you for being so kind to me about it. And ya, I did mess up a bit in grammar. lol ^^ Hey, you live and you learn! Still, thanks a lot to you all! I think I may write another :cleris: fan fic!

[EDIT: Oh! I added a sub chapter and epilogue! ^^]
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aerisbolt
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Neko I didn't know you wrote a fanfic. It was very good! I really enjoyed it and I loved how you styled the epilogue in a letter from Reeve. I hope you will write more. :huggle:
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Trisse
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OHHH i like your fic!! i also like the 'what if' aspect of the story, it really draws you in!!! i like it!!!

I hope you update soon!!! i am curious to see who this girl cloud met at the station is?!?! lol very interesting!!
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