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| Cloud And Aeris Kiss; Do you think it will happen? | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 4 2004, 03:34 PM (7,583 Views) | |
| kyra_leonheart | Nov 19 2004, 03:52 PM Post #46 |
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Sometimes the only way to find your light is within Darkness
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The picture is great, the story even better......God why do some have everything and others nothing?!? You (SweetJanie) MUST continue the story, it´s GREAT!!! By the way, you said that in you´re country you mother language isn´t English, where are you from? If I may ask....Mine isn´t it as well so probably we live in the same country ;) |
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| Sefie | Nov 19 2004, 03:55 PM Post #47 |
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Eyes of dream-water
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That's BEAUTFIL! You mind if I color it? |
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| SweetJanie | Nov 19 2004, 04:13 PM Post #48 |
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I'm from Portugal. You can check on my profile, I think it's there.... If you others have problems with seeing the pic, go to http://dontyoulovethem.com/ She's there!! Hum...I'm writting it now, but I'm still in the begining... but it's gonna be good!!! It kinda reminds me of Lenne...(ffx-2) It takes place in the Forgotten City. The main characters are Cloud and Aeris. Other characters are the three brothers: Kadaj, Yazoo and Loz. Now...imagine what could happen in there... B) oh, before I forget...what's LMAO ? |
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| SweetJanie | Nov 19 2004, 04:17 PM Post #49 |
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Sure you can Sefie. *BIG GASP* Wrong address!!!!!!!! It's http://dontyoulovethem.blogspot.com/ Sorry....
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| kyra_leonheart | Nov 19 2004, 04:17 PM Post #50 |
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Sometimes the only way to find your light is within Darkness
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Cant believe it!!! Me too. I´m already imagining how your story is going to me. Please don´t take too long. Ps: I loved Lenne and Shuiyn. |
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| SweetJanie | Nov 19 2004, 04:44 PM Post #51 |
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What? WHAT?!? I'm not the only one from this stupid country?!? De onde és? Eu sou da Lousã, fica ao pé de Coimbra. Elas é que não vão perceber nada... :) Português é giro mas difícil de aprender...tal como Portugal é bonito mas é difícil viver nele...pelo menos para mim! Translation: Where are you from? I'm from Lousã, it's near Coimbra. They won't get a thing we're saying... :) Portuguese is funny but hard to learn...just like Portugal is pretty but hard to live on...at least for me! |
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| kyra_leonheart | Nov 19 2004, 04:49 PM Post #52 |
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Sometimes the only way to find your light is within Darkness
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I´m from Sabugal, near Guarda. It´s not very far. We should meet some time. Yeah, it´s hard to live here, but we (at least I) don´t have another choice. I´m writting in English so they can understand but is nice to know there are other Portuguese people arround here. |
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| SweetJanie | Nov 19 2004, 08:32 PM Post #53 |
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I think I've been there once or twice, not sure... Great castle, though! Prepare yourselves, because here comes the sequel of Cloud and Aeris' Kiss!!!! ![]() ------------------------------------------ Introduction ------------------------------------------ In one of the many Cloud's rides on Fenrir, this time he went to a place he hadn't gone for two years. The Forgotten City. The lost capital where Aeris' body rested in peace. Besides the six swords kept within the motorcycle, flowers from the Church in Midgar were safely attached with pink bands, the same used by the rest of the old group, who wore it in their right or left arms, in Aeris' honour. When he got there, he went straight to the lake where he had laid her body for the eternal rest. Nothing had changed. Cloud sat down by the lake and placed the flowers in the water, one by one. Twenty-two were now floating in the lake, the age she had when... "I'm older than you, now..." The thought that she was an year older at that time made him remind his mother's words: "You should have a nice girlfriend...an older one...one that would take care of you..." "You were perfect in my mother's eyes...and so in my..." He closed his eyes and a certain kiss came to his mind... Bitting his lips, he got up and climbed the steps, up to the altar. The altar of her death. When he saw the altar with the light shining down on it, the worst of his memories seemed to be happening right in front of him. A falling Sephiroth, with Masamune in both hands, piercing through the innocent Aeris, who had been praying to the planet. Cloud felt the back of his eyes burning, but held back what wanted to come out. Aproaching the edge of the altar, he looked at the lake. Three silver haired men were talking near it. |
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| Anastar | Nov 20 2004, 01:15 AM Post #54 |
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To touch the light I see in your eyes...
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Don't stop there!!! :o Keep going! I want to know what happens! :ph43r: |
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| Aerith | Nov 20 2004, 10:24 AM Post #55 |
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Olha, nao sabia k haviam aki portuguesas k fixe, eu sou do Pinhal Novo (perto de Setúbal)Nao tava mesmo ah espera k houvessem Cleris aki xD |
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| SweetJanie | Nov 20 2004, 04:41 PM Post #56 |
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O quê? A sério? Bem, isto ta a começar a ficar mt portuga Atão, o k axas d Portugal? Kem m dera ser japonesa... ou americana :rolleyes: Well, the story...ok, I'm writting it here, not on my scratchbook like I did in the introduction. Don't mind the mistakes... :ph43r: ------------------------------------- "We need to find Mother, Kadaj!!" "Relax, Loz...We'll find her soon enough and I can just bet our little brother is gonna help us." "Talking about him..." Yazoo pointed up to the altar. Cloud was up there, looking down at them. "Oh...so you came to join us, brother..." Kadaj moved forward and stepped the water of the lake. "LET'S PARTY, BROTHER!!!!" Loz picked up his sword-shaped pistol and, while running into the water to get a closer look, he fired at Cloud several times. Cloud dodged the bullets and jumped on the stones that led to the lake. On one of the the stones, when he was closer to the silver haired men who were shooting at him, he jumped again to the wall and pulled out his sword to scratch it. Huge sparkles appeared where stone met steel. Cloud kicked the wall and, as if flying in they're direction, threw a fire attack with his sword. Yazoo defended them with a magic shield and Kadaj ran towards Cloud with his sword in hand, which was very similar to Masamune. Loz also went to fight him, followed by Yazoo. Suddenly, petals filled the air and the four of them stopped to watch. "What the-?" The three silver haired guys looked around them in disbelieve. Aeris? A tremendous light made them close their eyes. When Cloud opened his, Aeris was in front of him, facing the three brothers, with arms wide open. "Stop! Why are you fighting?" "What the hell?! Where did you came from?" "Is she an illusion?A ghost?" "There is no such things as ghosts..." Kadaj step forward to the girl. "Step aside, missy. We're trying to have a fight here." "A fight? You call this a fight?" Kadaj looked confused at her. "You nothing but cowards!! Three against one? Are you so afraid to fight him on your own?!" He's faced showed anger and he turned to the other two. "Get back." "What?" "No way!! I'm fighting him too!!!" "I said to GET BACK!! JUST GO AWAY FROM HERE!! I'M FIGHTING HIM ALONE!!!" Still not very convinced that was the right thing to do, they left the area. "Now...step aside." Aeris stood in the same place. "I said...STEP ASIDE!!!" Cloud laid his hand on her shoulder. "Do as he says, Aeris." "Don't worry. He can't kill me, right?" She smile at him. "MOVE ASIDE, YOU BITCH!!!" Cloud's anger rose when he heard those words. He left his sword fall on the ground and jumped on Kadaj. He was so distracted he didn't even got time to react. They fell down and Cloud punched him on the face several times. "NEVER SAY THAT AGAIN TO AERIS, YOU MOTHER FUCKER!!!!!!!!" Breathing fast because of the punching, he picked Kadaj's sword and pointed it at his throat. "Or you're dead." Cloud got up and threw him back the sword. Kadaj picked it up... "Next time, you'll die, brother..." ...and left. Cloud looked back at Aeris. Her hands were covering her mouth in surprise. "Wow, Cloud..." She got closer to him and smiled. "Thank you for defending my honour!" She laughed a little and, for the first time in a while, so he did. "Now...what does my bodyguard deserve as a token of my gratitude?" "Is it gonna be another date?" "That's kinda hard now...but..." She got even closer. "I think I can do better than that." She put her hands on his face and kissed him three times, the last one longer than the others. She jumped back and giggled. "You'll only get more after saving the world!!" He laughed. "I'm looking forward to that moment..." She looked at the flowers that were floating on the water. "Thank you for those flowers. They're beautiful." "Not as beautiful as you..." He was looking down. Saying those things made him feel embarraced. She smiled softly and huged him. "I gotta go now..." "I wish you didn't..." She stepped back and put her hands on her waist. "Now go and save the world!" Aeris giggled at his surprised face and they laughed again. "Ok, then...until next time." "See you later, Cloud." They both turned their backs to each other and light broke the darkness in the Forgotten City. We'll be together again, after I save this planet once again... ----------------------------------- Done!! So, what do you think? |
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| kyra_leonheart | Nov 20 2004, 05:48 PM Post #57 |
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Sometimes the only way to find your light is within Darkness
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The story´s great!!! Tens de continuar. Aerith, Setúbal é uma zona lindíssima. Não fazia ideia de que eramos tantos Portugueses aqui. |
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| Cloudsgirl | Nov 21 2004, 02:43 AM Post #58 |
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awwwwww!!! Cloud defended her honor..... *sigh* so so cute, great job! |
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| Clorith | Nov 21 2004, 04:33 AM Post #59 |
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Oooh, so cute and fluffy! I loved it! We need to stuff the world with fluff, I say!
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| KagoBon | Nov 21 2004, 07:53 AM Post #60 |
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:o :o :o :o :o :o :o *faints* i viewed that in my head the whole time i read that! you're soo good! I LOVED IT! :lol: |
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