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| Topic Started: Jul 21 2007, 11:40 AM (70 Views) | |
| Lord High Summoner | Jul 21 2007, 11:40 AM Post #1 |
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Chosen Slayer of man and Warrior of Love
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Only you can build me up When the world has torn me down I can always find your warm presence When it seems no one else is around I constantly find myself dreaming of your touch The way your smooth hands runs softly down my cheek And just the thought of your enticing kiss Makes me quiver and I suddenly get weak I can still feel your body protected in my arms And I can still sense the sweet smell of your hair But each passing moment that I live without you The more the strings of my heart begin to tear But as we meet again, and I gaze into your eyes All my pain and sorrow is put at ease Then our bodies embrace with passion Uniting with a warm and gentle squeeze I can't believe one of God's greatest creations Was bestowed upon me from above And how someone I've know for so little Could allow me to feel so much love I now know that finding you was my purpose in life And though troubles are destined to arise As long as our hearts are entangled as one We'll soar above our problems and into the skies There's only one girl that fulfills me, both in body and mind One girl that showers me with these feelings so true There's only one girl I'll love, both now and forever There's only one girl for me, only you. |
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| Enialis | Jul 21 2007, 12:23 PM Post #2 |
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not bad....but why is it that almost every poem I read is about love? .....nvm. anyway, thats really good. don't try anything with me LHS! why? cause I'm a guy! no chika! understand? LOL. anyway, I want to read more of your poems and all.....thisin was good. |
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| Lord High Summoner | Jul 21 2007, 02:18 PM Post #3 |
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Lolz, i wouldn't dream of messin with ya and thanks for the compliment I think I kinda got bored and word vomit happened XD |
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| nya_chan | Jul 27 2007, 08:07 PM Post #4 |
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TeH g00fy admin (I wonder why no one takes me seriously...)
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Love/romance has never been my thing. XP Since there's almost no punctuation, it'd be much easier to read if it was divided into lines instead of just left as that... um... block. *waves hands vaguely* Not that I'm trying to be mean, I just meant it would help with the... aesthetics? No, that's not the word I'm looking for.... |
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| Lord High Summoner | Jun 27 2008, 10:51 AM Post #5 |
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Alright, I've neglected this for far too long, I've been writing more of these for some time and I'll post them in order of oldest to latest... Mom: Flash of lightning through the air The beat of rain begins to drone Howling wind through my hair Help me god, Mom is home ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sins: Seven Deadly Sins Await 'round the bend So I packed a bag and took a trip To make my life amends ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jeff Hardy XP: Whisper in the wind Silence settles through Now he has the pin Orton had no clue With rage hardy was born anew His eyes now filled with hate Family means everything, Orton should have knew Now the tide has turned, a Twist of Fate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love: In this life of ours there is no such thing as love just a mere lust for another persons touch ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Betrayal: How could you do me like that Just stab me in the back When I alone Stood by your side In those hard times in which you Were hated by all? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Waiting: Days fly by with a quickened pace The world is now a great hearty race Times are changing without falter A many men rush to the alter But alas I still stand alone Forever waiting like a stone. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Emotion: Ebbing tides wash about me those old emotions now returned That soft touch taints my mind and like a fool I fall again Down the road known as passion. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now for two poems made entirely out of Prepositional Phrases: Through the clouds Bound for action On the ground Beside the battle Against the tide Into war Behind the flames Atop my dragon ============ Out of the ash Among the flames Through new attacks Into their trap Atop my dragon Behind her flames Beside our bretheren Into THEIR war. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Touch: In the days before I met you I never knew the simple pleasures of a touch But since that day I have yet to feel as much emotion As our intertwined hands in all that commotion Many more to come |
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| wyatt the arceus | Jul 5 2008, 08:15 PM Post #6 |
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A master leek spinner, indeed.
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*claps* Love teh poems, lhs. |
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