The Tale of Azurril's Forest contest

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The Tale of Azurril's Forest contest
Topic Started: Jan 30 2007, 03:07 PM (60 Views)
The Stone Registeel	Jan 30 2007, 03:07 PM Post #1
New Member Posts: 25 Group: Members Member #23 Joined: January 30, 2007	In this contest the goal is to create a story about an Azurril. He/she lives in Carrion Forest, and one day uncovers a secret tunnel. You must write what he/she finds in the tunnel, and how he/she finds his/her way out. Rules: Smilies: Disallowed Limit: 20 lines Other Pokemon: Allowed Items: Allowed If you think of anything else ask me, and i'll get back to you. Have fun!
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nya_chan	Jan 31 2007, 05:06 PM Post #2
TeH g00fy admin (I wonder why no one takes me seriously...) Posts: 749 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: December 14, 2006	Azurril did realize that in order to form a rescue team you need more than one member. Refusing to submit to this simple fact, he decided to go freelance. Who needed the Pelipper anyway? Without having convinent rescue requests sent to his mailbox, he had to search for work himself. On his second step out the door, he promptly fell down a hole. Down, down he fell, finally landing with a hard "thud!" on the ground. A loud, rumbling roar could be heard, like an earthquake in pain. "This is so not what I signed up for..." he muttered. Of course, he hadn't really signed up for anything in the first place. "I don't want to do this any more...." The roar sounded again. Azurril took off to where he hoped was away from the source of the noise. No such luck. He collieded with a giant red wall. ...That wasn't really a wall. Backing away in terror, Azurril went wide-eyed at the sight of none other than Groudon. "W-water gu..gun...." A tiny drop of water came out, landing on the massive Legendary Pokemon. Groudon laughed hysterically. Who knew that continent-shapers could be ticklish? The laughs set off a chain-reaction of earthquakes, causing a giant rock to come crashing down on Azurril. Thanks to the magic of being in a Rescue Team member, he warpped back to Pokemon Square unscathed. "What happened?" asked a Pokemon. "Are you sure you want to do this?" "Nah, I'm fine. ...Could I go back?" ------------------------------------ 20 lines exactly! ... <_< what a weak ending....



The Stone Registeel	Feb 1 2007, 01:36 PM Post #3
New Member Posts: 25 Group: Members Member #23 Joined: January 30, 2007	Bravo! Apart from the ending. Plus, your story is 17 lines, but you add the last three lines at the bottom of your post.
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The One And Only.....	Feb 6 2007, 04:33 AM Post #4
Yay a member title, I've never had enough posts for this! Posts: 62 Group: Members Member #24 Joined: February 6, 2007	Azurill was a simple pokemon who hated her life because she was bullied for being the smallest weakest pokemon at school. One day she fell down a tunnel and broke her tail. This is very serious as Azurill walk on their tail. She needed help, but no one was around poor Azurill started crying. A pack of Mightyena hear her crying and came to the source of the noise. They attacked oen by one, but Azurill let out Tackle after tackle after tackle. She defeated one eventually and gained a lot of exp. Enough to evolve. The Mightyena fled as Azur - I mean Marill pumped a high pressured water gun after them. Marill, who was now fully healed, shot a water gun at the ground and was flung up out of the whole. After this day, Marill learnt and important lesson. Never, ever love life unless you value it. Who knows if you could fall down a hole one day and break your tail/legs and be unable to move and might get ripped apart by viciously hungry Mightyena. The next day and for every day after that Marill went down that hole to train. Her friends at school were amazed at a little Azurill magically became a high powered powerhouse Azumarill in a matter of weeks. After falling down that hole, her whole life turned upside down and changed for the better. Maybe we all need a big whole that we can break our tail/legs on an bea unable to move and be Ok by the end of the day but much stronger. We all have a hole in our life. We just don't realise it. One day you could feel suicidal and then a tragedy comes your way the next. But the day after that something good will happen....Hopefully...
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