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nya_chan	Mar 19 2007, 02:43 PM
TeH g00fy admin (I wonder why no one takes me seriously...) Posts: 749 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: December 14, 2006	As a reader, I say it's too short to provide good detail, and as an admin, I say 25 lines is not the 30 lines the rules call for. I have to agree with Ramzam on this one. It's not bad, but it could be better. I personally am not a fan of what I call "in your face descriptions" like your 2nd paragraph. It's usually a bit "smoother" when you work the description into the story.


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