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Ramzam	Feb 22 2007, 10:05 PM
Everybody's Favorite DDR Posts: 832 Group: Moderators Member #4 Joined: December 16, 2006	Chapter 7 Riveing looked around a dark hall. “It’s hard to believe there’s a key here.” He said to himself. Kiero had already left the underground structure, leaving him behind, to look for the key. ‘Worse, it gets darker, the farther I go’ He thought to himself, as he began walking. ‘Probably to add to it is that Jason has the real key and whoever’s supposed to be guarding the key has some sort of trick that’ll turn them into a pushover, if I know how to get around it.’ He held one of his pokeballs, in case he were attacked. He walked through the darkness until he finally came into a large, open room. Light quickly filled the room and a door slammed shut, behind him. He looked up, to see massive diamond chandeliers, glittering in the light. There were metal ledges and spikes jutting out, from the walls. A large pit was in the middle of the room. It had four large poles coming up, from the bottom. “So, you took the care to venture further into the darkness, did you?” A voice asked, as a platform slowly descended from the ceiling. The pit suddenly grew larger and the four poles glowed. “Though, it would have been a wiser choice to leave. Do you know what’s at the bottom of that pit?” The voice asked, as the platform stopped, with a man on it. His black and grey suit shined in the light. “Spikes…nothing but spikes.” He said, sternly, as the four glowing poles sent out purple, glowing lines to each other. The lines spread out, to make a square field of purple energy. “By the way, the name’s Hirokian.” The name hit Riveing hard. Hirokian was a name he’d heard before. Hirokian was one of the few people he’d never been able to defeat. “Remember me? I’m your copy, your alter ego. You could say we’re related…but I’m much better than you could ever hope to be.” Hirokian said, pointing at him, with a pokeball in his hand. “I’m a change man, Hiroki…I don’t plan to lose this time…I can’t…I’ll have my revenge on Jason, if it’s the last thing I do!” Riveing shouted, ready to throw his own pokeball. “Oh dear me, Jason has incurred the wrath of mighty Riveing?” Hirokian asked, mockingly. “I’d like to see how this would unfold…a loser versus another loser…what an exciting match-up.” Hirokian said as he clapped his hands. “Shut up!” Riveing shouted, throwing his pokeball. It froze in midair, along with time. He found himself in darkness and facing the gate to the other world. “Riveing!” The mysterious voice of the void boomed. “You shouldn’t blindly rush into a battle! You may be angry, but that doesn’t mean you should challenge those you can’t defeat. Think about--” Riveing interrupted the voice. “Send me back!” He shouted. “I don’t want to hear from you until the time’s come!” He shouted and the darkness quickly faded away. He heard the voice sigh, then time began moving again. His pokeball flew over to the platform and released Feraligatr. “Whatever happened to Arbok? It was your number one pokemon. Go, Arbok!” Hirokian shouted, throwing his own pokeball, releasing Arbok onto the platform. “After all, we have the same pokemon. What’s in your fourth pokeball?” He asked, raising an eyebrow at Riveing. “Did you pass it up, for a legendary?” He asked. “Just wait and find out. You clone.” Riveing said, harshly. “Feraligatr, whatever you do, don’t let Arbok wrap around you.” He said to Feraligatr, who wordlessly nodded. “Alright! Start this with dynamic punch!” Riveing commanded and Feraligatr charged at Arbok, with it’s right arm back. “That’s your best shot? Arbok, jump over it.” Hirokian said, casually and Arbok sprung into the air, from it’s coiled position, arc right over Feraligatr, as it charge with it’s glowing fist. Feraligatr stopped it’s attack, looking back at Arbok, in surprise. Riveing was equally surprised. They’d never expected to see an arbok jump. “Now, Arbok, use wrap.” Hirokian continued, tiredly. “Dodge it!” Riveing shouted an Feraligatr spun out of the way, in time to avoid Arbok, as it lunged at it. “Try dynamic punch again!” Riveing shouted and Feraligatr quickly spun back to Arbok, which had stopped itself and punched it, with a glowing fist. Arbok began swaying dizzily, as Feraligatr’s punch made contact. “Now follow that with slash!” Riveing shouted and Feraligatr spun a full three-sixty, as it slashed Arbok’s raised area of it’s body. “Pull yourself together, Arbok!” Hirokian shouted and Arbok shook it’s head, recovering from it’s confusion. “Now, while it’s stopping itself! Use wrap!” Hirokian shouted and Arbok quickly wrapped around Feraligatr, squeezing it as hard as it could. “Feraligatr, can you hear me?” Riveing asked, concerned. Feraligatr just managed to nod. “Okay then, try using bite!” Riveing shouted and Feraligatr opened it’s mouth, ready bite Arbok’s head off if it had to. “Look out!” Hirokian shouted to Arbok, who was too busy squeezing Feraligatr to pay attention. Feraligatr bit down on Arbok, behind it’s head and it quickly uncoiled itself and thrashed about, threatening to throw Feraligatr off it’s balance. “Hey, that’s an illegal attack!” Hirokian shouted at Riveing, angrily. “Why don’t you fight with honor?” He asked, pointing at him. “Yeah, right. Okay, Feraligatr, give it a good toss into the wall!” Riveing shouted and Feraligatr let go of Arbok and grabbed it with it’s hands, rather than it’s jaw. Feraligatr threw the flailing pokemon right into the side of one of the platforms, projecting from the wall. Arbok made a loud crunch as well. “No! Arbok!” Hirokian shouted and quickly returned it to it’s pokeball. “If that’s how you’re going to fight, then fine! Do this for Arbok, Sceptile!” He yelled, throwing his second pokeball, releasing Sceptile onto the platform. “You’ve had enough, Feraligatr.” Riveing said, recalling Feraligatr, while throwing Charizard’s pokeball. Charizard shot to the platform in a mass of red energy. “Don’t wait! Use rapid blade!” Hirokian shouted and the leaves on Sceptile’s wrists glowed, as it dashed at Charizard in a green streak. Charizard found itself being knocked around by the constant leaf blade attacks. “Now, use razor leaf and knock it over the edge!” Hirokian shouted. “Charizard, use fire whip!” Riveing shouted and Charizard spun, hitting Sceptile in the face with the tip of it’s tail. The flame on it’s tail left a burn mark “Now use crystal shot and flame thrower, together!” He shouted and Charizard sent a shower of crystal shards, mixed in a pillar of fire, at Sceptile. “Now, Sceptile! Deflect it with our new move!” Hirokian shouted and Sceptile crossed it’s arms, with the leaves on it’s wrists glowing. It quickly spun it’s arms in a circle and form a circle of white, which absorbed Charizard’s attack, then shot it back. “Now add to it, with bullet seed!” He added and Sceptile shot several glowing seeds from it’s mouth. “Flap your wings and stop it, Charizard!” Riveing shouted and Charizard flapped it’s wings, hard enough to raise a wind that slowed the fire and crystal shards enough, so the fire trickled out and the crystals fell to the ground. “Now that’s defense! Use fireball!” He added and Charizard held it’s right arm back, with a glowing ball of light in it. “Sceptile, use razor tail!” Hirokian shouted and Sceptile instantly dashed forward. The ball of light in Charizard’s hand caught fire, as Sceptile closed in. Sceptile spun to attack with it’s tail, just as Charizard threw the fireball. “Yes!” “Dodge!” Riveing shouted and Charizard, quickly moved, but was caught by the tip of Sceptile’s tail. “Try flamethrower, while you can still fight!” He exclaimed and Charizard breathed a pillar of flame at Sceptile, who was now vulnerable. The attack missed, as Charizard fell to the ground and fainted. “You fought great…” Riveing said, his voice trailing off, as he recalled Charizard. He took his next pokeball and threw it. “Show ‘im who’s boss, Dragonite!” He shouted, as Dragonite appeared on the platform, in a bright light. “Use dragon wrath!” He shouted and Dragonite sent a red, lightning-like beam at Sceptile. The beam split into three and converged on Sceptile, knocking it out. Riveing recalled Dragonite and threw Feraligatr’s pokeball, as Hirokian threw his third and last. It was Feraligatr, against Feraligatr. “Start this, with dynamic punch!” Riveing shouted and R. Feraligatr shot forward, holding it’s arm back, as it’s fist glowed white. “Use counter-toss!” Hirokian yelled and H. Feraligatr sidestepped R. Feraligatr’s attack and threw it to the ground. “Now use hydro pump!” He shouted and H. Feraligatr unleashed a steady stream of water into R. Feraligatr’s back. “Recover with slash, Feraligatr!” Riveing shouted and R. Feraligatr flipped over, clawing H. Feraligatr, and jumping high into the air. “Now use hydro pump, to get on the chandelier!” He added and R. Feraligatr shot a column of water into the ground, pushing itself up onto the chandelier above. “You too, Feraligatr!” Hirokian shouted and H. Feraligatr did the same as R. Feraligatr. “Use dynamic punch as an uppercut! Throw slash into the equation, too!” Riveing shouted and R. Feraligatr leapt forward, with it’s arm out and it’s claw glowing white. Just as H. Feraligatr landed on the chandelier, R. Feraligatr swung it’s arm upward, scratching H. Feraligatr, then formed a fist and punched it in the jaw. “Now break the chain, holding the chandelier up!” Riveing shouted and R. Feraligatr dashed over to the thick chain and grabbed onto it. “Hurry, Feraligatr! Use seismic toss and throw it off the chandelier!” Hirokian shouted and H. Feraligatr leapt at R. Feraligatr, but was too late; the chain had snapped. “Now get back over here!” Riveing shouted up to R. Feraligatr and it ran to the edge of the chandelier and jumped down, landing next to Riveing. The chandelier quickly fell too fast for H. Feraligatr to escape. It rose into the air as the chandelier fell faster. “Ah, no!” Hirokian shouted as he helplessly watched the chandelier, along with H. Feraligatr fall to the spikes below. “I’ll be back someday! Count on it!” Hirokian shouted, recalling feraligatr, as he turned and ran. The disk-like key landing on the ground, in front of Riveing. He recalled Feraligatr and picked up the key. “Really? Sorry, but the spots of arch nemesis one and two are both taken.” He said, as he put the key away. He now had three of the eight keys to Geenara’s hideout. One more and he’d be halfway to saving the rest of his family. Just as he turned around, someone shot him with a dart gun…
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