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nya_chan	Nov 17 2007, 09:14 PM
TeH g00fy admin (I wonder why no one takes me seriously...) Posts: 749 Group: Admin Member #1 Joined: December 14, 2006	I see some potential, but your lack of grammar covers it. I could see that you were trying for desciptions and the like, but because the writing was a bit awkward, it was difficult to take in the images of the locations and people. Also, it's extremely short. -_-; A few suggestions: The name "Junior" is always spelled out when writing, never abbreviated. Also, if your chapters are short, try combining them instead of posting a ton of short events. It makes your writing look organized. Finally, type your story on Word first so you can run spell check and what not. It's extremely useful. =3


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