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| BaZul | Jan 20 2010, 04:37 AM Post #41 |
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Chapter Twenty Four: Unintended Rescue - Din sits down on a sofa and thinks as he puts his hand over his head for a second, the men takes a seat on the couch and chairs, watching over him as he thinks... - Din: " What makes you people think I wont betray you and tell Jack the moment i find him? " Man #1: " If you do such a thing, you will be terminated and we will just ruin everything you worked on for a long time, you wouldent want to lose years of hard work, would you? " Din: " I guess not... " Man #1: " Besides, even if you did, we will then still get the infromation we need. " Din: " I will accept your offer under one condition. " Man #1: " What makes you think we will accept a deal from you? " Din: " For aslong as i dont make a decision, your stuck here, i wont do any effort to do anything related to your matter, you have no option but to accept the deal. " Man #1: " You havent changed abit, allright, what is your condition? " Din: " Tell me where Volture is, and I will report on Jack's Progress the minute i find him. " Man #1: " You drive a hard Bargain, my friend, but we have no option to accept such deal, i will tell you where he is. " - The first man looks at each of the other men, and nods. - Man #1: " He is... " - The man then looks at the other suited man on a chair, slowly vaporizing into Pitch Black smoke, he then pulls his pistol and aims at Din, but then the pistol drops, as he and the rest vaporise and vanish, Din picks up the pistol and keeps it close to him as he hears a knock on the door, he heads and opens it... - Moses: " Din? " Din: " Yeah? who are you? " Moses: " My name is Moses, i was told Jack is here? " - Din looks back into a scorch on the floor right infrom the sofa he sat on, with Pitch black smoke from it. - Din: " Sorry, but we need to go. " Moses: " Wait, what? " Din: " There is no time to explain, you got a car? " Moses: " Yeah, why? " Din: " Drive us to the Brotherhood, right now! " Moses: " Whats going on? " Din: " Not now, comeon, lets go! " - Din grabs Moses's Sleeve and pulls him outside to his car, he then enters the car and Moses heads out away from the house. - - Din and Moses head inside the Bortherhood main hall, Din turns around from Moses to inside, and infront of his in Rayne and behind him a large group of the members in the bortherhood. - Din: " Rayne... I.. uh... " Rayne: " Start Explaining whats going on, Din. " Din: " What? " Rayne: " Dont act like a fool, Din, we all know that your doing something. " - Din looks down, and Rayne crosses his arms while he is infront of the group and infront of Din. - End of Chapter Twenty Four |
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| BaZul | Jan 24 2010, 07:12 AM Post #42 |
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Chapter Twenty Five: Confession Rayne: " How could you do this, Din?! Bring in one of thaier people INSIDE our group for your own intentions, do you know how many rules you broke?! this is unbeliveable! " Din: " Rayne, Im really sorry, but it aint just that, its diffarant... " Rayne: " No Din! its not diffarant! you brought in our enemy without thinking of the consequences you can do on all of us! " Din: " I've gotten infromation, many things to aid us against them! " Rayne: " It wont help you, you just messed up everything we worked on for decades! " Moses: " Rayne, please stop for a second, let the man explain himself. " Rayne: " Stay out of this, Moses. " Moses: " No, i wont, he has every right to prove himself before punishment, its in the rules, especially if someone requests him to prove himself, your not the only one who wants the safty of everyone, im also interested in his story. " Rayne: " *humph* Allright, Go ahead Din. " Din: " Thank you, People, you see, I did bring in the enemy in our home, but not the entire enemy, I brought in thaier master pawn, who could grant us accsess to the Void, the place we have been trying to head onto for eras apon eras, I have you the key to our troubles, Jack is the key to end the madness once and for all. I have a plan with him that i kept secret from all of you, he and I are planning to make Jack a Free man, away from the enemies controll, and also, I have a name for the enemy we are opposing, the secret name that we are searching for. 'The Haikasho'. They are the ones responsible for everything you see now, but wer going to end it End thaier tyranny once and for all, and without Jack, we cant do so. But I have a few bad news. The Haikasho came to me and wished for me to be with them, But i declined, and before they could take me by force, they vaporised in pitch Black smoke exactly when Moses entered, Also, we were thaier pawns, and they know all about our plans from the start, and Jack is now missing, but not by The Haikasho, he just vanished. We need to find him, as soon as possible, and Unleash our attack at The Haikasho as soon as possible, Hear my plan! We will devide into Two Groups, every single Devision Divided for a factor, One Group will make the Attack Plan, and the other one will search for Jack eventually, we will all strike together, and end this once and for all! Rayne: " I guess your right... Allright Everyone! You heard the Plan! everyone Join One of the Groups and Report Back to your officals, go! " - everyone starts heading to diffarant locations, and Rayne heads to Din and puts his hand on his shoulder - Rayne: " Nice speech you did there, You be the Negotiator for both groups, your incharge of this little operation, do well. " Din: " Allright, you go with the Attack Plan group, Moses, Come with me and we will form up the search group, lets go guys. " - Rayne nods and heads away with the crowd, Moses and Din head upstairs and the screen heads upwards and then fades black - End of Chapter Twenty Five |
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| BaZul | Mar 3 2010, 10:40 AM Post #43 |
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Chapter Twenty Six: That Special Someone - Jack is in his room, watching the ceiling, thinking about whats going on back with Din, what is he doing and thinking since his dissapearance. Jack became much more fierce and the journey that he went through can be seen on his face, with the finishing touch of his weary eyes that wish real rest. a knock on the door is heard and the door moves slightly as a head pops into view Joey looked inside and looked at Jack, which just looked at him. - Joey: " Crose is looking for you. " Jack: " Something important? " Joey: " I really dont know, he dident bother to tell me. " Jack: " So I guess I should go there then. " Joey: " Oh yeah, just so you know, we are going out on a operation Tommarow. " - This is the first time Jack was offered to join on one of his devision's Operations, he looked at Joey with slight happiness expressing his face, Jack tried to make sure Joey wont notice. - Jack: " Allright, I'll talk to you about that, but not untill eveaning. " Joey: " Ok, I'll see you then. " - Joey took his head back and went away, leaving the door slightly open. Jack stood up and streatched out, and then went to Mr. Crose's Office. He knocked on the door and went inside, Mr. Crose was reading a book, only when Jack closed the door Crose noticed Jack and closed the book, putting it aside. - Mr. Crose: " Ah, Jack, its nice to see you. " Jack: " Likewise, is there something you need from me? " Mr. Crose: " Stright to the point, eh? allright. I need you to do a special mission on behalf of our organization, I was told that its not wise to attack full force at each strike, but only at the finishing strike, so im going to follow that plan. I want you to try and make as much trouble as you can to the U.U.U, so that our attack on them might give us more chances to win this battle, take everything they require, steal anything they have, destroy anything they need and carry or have. we need them weakened as much as possible. " Jack: " Must I start now? " Mr. Crose: " No, this mission is of your own free time, any chance you can do it. but be reminded, that the less you do it, the most likely our attack will fail. " Jack: " Got it. " Mr. Crose: " Good, now head back to Joey, I think he is waiting for you. " - Mr. Crose waved to Jack to go, and then returned to his book. Jack went outside Mr. Crose's Office and went along the hall, he goes back into the living quarters, heading to his room. He stops by Din's door, thinking of eaither to go inside or keep heading forward. Jack decides to head forward, and continues forward, after a few steps Jeoy opens his room's door and Looks at Jack. - Joey: " Everything allright? " - Joey asks with a concerned look to Jack as he sees that something is odd Jack: " Everything is fine. " Joey: " Allright. " - Joey closes the door, and Jack continues on to his room. Once Jack is in his room, he closes the door and falls into his bed. Images from all of what happened to him flashes in his mind, his attempts fail as he tries to controll the burst of emotions that he never felt before, he knew that being away from thaier controll makes him see and feel things he never felt or seen before. He sees all he done in his life, all he met, all he killed, all he had to go through to survive. He goes into extreme mood ever since he got aquainted with this group, and each passing day he feels them getting stronger. he bursts into tears of what he done to many families and for people of the world he once knew to be evil, stupid and weird, he cant help to stop, for it is too strong for him to handle anything he ever tried to. Joey is in the other side of the door, he hears him cry. Joey was allways there for Jack, he knew something was strange about him but he couldent put his finger on it, something seemed to be diffarant about him than the rest, he wanted to know about his past, who he was, why was he captured? and why does he know nothing about whats going on in the world? he dident trust Jack completly, but he knew that what Jack needs now is help, someone to understand, he knew what he was going through, atleast by what he known. - **MEANWHILE** - Rayne is discussing with the rest of high ranked members inside the Attack devision... - Rayne: " What do we have that is avilable anytime? " Officer #1: " Our troops are allways avilable and will do as we command the second they can. " Officer #2: " I think using that source of energy will be a bad idea. " Rayne: " What do you propose? " Officer #2: " We have no idea how long will it take untill we find Jack, dont forget it takes up time to search for Volture... " Rayne: " Volture can wait, he will understand once we will explain to him our Delay, we have a chance we might never have again! " Officer #2: " I guess your right... It will still be wise to prepare a waiting force rathar than keeping the rest On guard and eventually tiring them and make them useless. " Rayne: " I guess your right, that we will do. " Officer #3: " Maybe we can unite the two searches together, and create a mass invasion, most likely that Volture is in the same place as Jack. " Rayne: " We will have to discuss this with Din, he has a better answer than me. " ... Din: " Hm, Unite the two searches you say? " - Din looked at the ceiling and thought about it for a few minutes before responding back. - Din: " Now that you mention it, both Volture and Jack disappeared in a strange way, perhaps they are close together. If not, then once we find eaither, we can continue to search for the second, also i recall now that Jack vanished while leaving behind him the smoke that The Haikasho's Agents leave when they die or vanish back to where they were sent from... " Rayne: " Do you think Volture and Jack are in captivity at The Void? " Din: " It seems most likely. " Rayne: " Then this puts us in a much worse situation. " Din: " So it does, it means that now we have to triple our efforts in the Search Devision, now we need to research about The Void to better understand what we will do once we get them, becouse now we are entering the enemies terretory. " Rayne: " Allright, you go with that, keep informing about progress, ok? i'll build up the soliders. " Din: " You go and do that. " - Rayne leaves the room and Din returns to his work, the screen heads away and fades black. - End of Chapter Twenty Six |
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| BaZul | Mar 15 2010, 02:30 PM Post #44 |
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Chapter Twenty Six: Close friends share all - Jack was at the training room, practicing his Hand-To-Hand Combat on a dummy, when Joey entered the room. Jack continued training even though he did notice Joey enter and approach him. - Jack: " I've decided to come along, thought you might wanna know sooner. " Joey: " Wait, what? " - Joey said with a slight confusion expression in his voice - Jack: " The operation? " Joey: " Oh, yeah, allright. Well, meet us tommarow morning by the back gate, But im here for something else. " Jack: " Then out with it. " - Joey looked as Jack was slightly irritated for some reason - Joey: " Ever since you arrived, you confined yourself to youre room and left only for the daily training or when you are called. " Jack: " Where is this going? " - Jack said as he hitted a few heavy blows on the dummy - Joey: " Is there something amiss that you arent telling us? " - Jack makes a combo that rips off several of the dummies limbs, when the final blow nearly slices off the dummy's head. - Jack: " Do you see that dummy? " Joey: " Yeah? " Jack: " Thats probably what happened to all the people I ever met or known about, or they are even in a worser state than that. " Joey: " Look, I know what you are going through... " - Joey said with slight comapassion even though he was lying - Jack: " No you dont! you have no idea what I am going through! " Joey: " Then tell us! all of us are more than willing to sit for how much time is required. " Jack: " That would be very stupid of me. Plus, you wouldent understand. " Joey: " Not unless you say it right. " - Joey looked at Jack who stared at the mutilated dummy, Jack then went to dispose of the dummy, Joey followed him. - Joey: " I cannot force you to do anything, Jack, but if you want, every weekend night, we sit all together around a several fires and share with eachother our stories, old and new. even songs or whatever we made during our time, not everyone has something to share, but people who have, do. It would be nice to see you there. " - Jack known about the fires themselves, but what they are about, he seen them from afar while patrolling and noticed that everyone was there, he thought it was stupid and unwise to leave his post for a fire, so he stayed patrolling, he heard the talk from afar about him, they called him "The Lone Watcher". Jack through the dummy to the trash as Joey tapped his hand on his shoulder. - Joey: " I'll see you later then. " - Joey left the room and Jack remained alone once again in the training room. He fell down to the floor and sat, taking a break from the long training he accumilated. He pondered at what happened to him since he arrived to this strange realm, what is going back with Din, the Brotherhood and the people he knew here. The evening passed by like the wind through leaves, no one noticed it untill it came and swooped over the facillity. Jack was passing by a window when he looked through to see from slightly afar the fires, thinking of eaither to head back to his room like what he allways did or head to the fires and tell his story, what would have happened in both cases, bad or good, he dident know what to do, he sighed and went to his room. As he entered his blank room that had only what the rest of the rooms are required to have, he sat on the bed looking at the loneliness and how empty the room really is. He started thinking about all he went through, being swept by emotions and feelings he never felt before, being out of The Haikasho's controll made him slowly discover things that were kept away from him, but due to the long time, they just conqured him and swept through him in large, never-ending waves. He felt the sadness after killing his victims, the anger that he felt againt The Haikasho, and the feeling of safty and peace that he felt with Din and The Brotherhood. He looked at the empty wall, crying when sad, inraged when angry. he couldent bear it, he prefered to stay under The Haikasho's controll, If this is what I need to go through in order to be free, then so be it. he then concluded, but then, he realised, it was the first time he ever heard his own thinking. he was amazed of how he really sounded, he never thought that was how he sounded like... Joey looks around next to a fire, in hope to see Jack in the crowd, but he is not there. He heads away from the crowd towards the resting chambers and head to Jack's Room, as he reach to knock on the door... - Jack: " Looking for someone? " - Joey turns around to see Jack is leaning against a wall from where he came. - Joey: " Uh... yeah... where were you? " Jack: " I was here. " Joey: " Arent you comeing? " Jack: " Excuse me? " Joey: " To the fires. " Jack: " No thanks, you said it as a advice, im not required. " - Joey sighed at his reply. - Joey: " Fine, I'll see you tommarow in the back gate. " - Joey left the other way, and Jack returned to his room, closing the door. - *MEANWHILE* - We find ourselves in The Void as two suited men talk to eachother with thaier backs turned to us and thaier faces concelled with the darkness of The Void, Talking in a flat, emotionless tone. - Man #1: " Have you seen Manica? " Man #2: " No, he is missing. " Man #1: " Should we alert? " Man #2: " Supposedly the right thing to do. " Man #1: " Do you have any concepts of this disappearance? " Man #2: " Not that I am fremilliar with. " Man #1: " Then I will alert this. " Man #2: " Regard the fact that Subject H41KA50 is not in The Void and that I will check again. " - The first man heads away as the second one stays put in his position, as the first man is gone in the darkness of The Void, the screen fades black. - End of Chapter Twenty Six |
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| BaZul | Mar 16 2010, 09:54 AM Post #45 |
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Hey there, Fellow readers. For some time now, there have been mentions of locations and terms that, to be honest, requires abit of explanation, so that you may better enjoy your reading my fiction. The first thing that should be discussed is The Void. Ofcourse, we all know about the term 'Void', but over in my fiction it is something diffarant. The Void, as far as most people know, is a a place that consists of Nothing, much like outor space, but without stars, suns or planets, just nothing. In my fiction though, The Void is a "Headquarters" of The Haikasho, It is a place where they do what they do, and have thaier fullest of powers. Now, let me explain a little about the connection between The Void and The Haikasho. You probably allready know a little about The Haikasho's past if you were reading my Fiction, if not then i suggest you go ahead ![]() The Void is thaier place of manipulation, over at The Void can they do anything they wish. Few questions occured to some of my testing readers (A few friends of mine who read and give me slight review and questions and remarks. ) Which I will list and answer. 1. How come, if The Void is a place of 'nothing-ness', does the people walk and not fall into the 'nothing-ness' of The Void itself? This is quite a common question, the pure reason is that The Void is a place that has no rules or bounderies, nothing. Everything that can go there, can use it for thaier own uses, which explains why the figures inside can stay put and not fall into The Void's endless fall. If thats so, then why the people who are trapped in The Void cant go out? This is because they did not enter there by thaier own will, they are taken by force into The Void by The Haikasho. Also, i would like to mention that the chair dosent allow them any controll over The Void. 2. How did those things appear in The Void? and how did they actually managed to do that to Jack? This is due to Manica, he did created that and he made it work as it did, just like The Void is supposed to do. 3. Whats up with the character's names? The names come from diffarant languages that reprisent certin things, (i'll skip the obvious) Jack: This is our Main character's name for several reasons Jack is the lowest of the Three face cards (Jack, Queen and King), From the phrase "You dont know jack" as in "You dont know anything", hench Jack is Anything. and Jack is from Hebrew (My main language) and it means 'God is gracious' ((Go see the first page and Post to understand that refarance)) Din: This name comes from, yet again, the Hebrew word that means 'Fate'. Rayne: To be honest, this has nothing to do with the real origin of the name for it is needed to be pronounced like Reign. Manica: Now, i forgot what language this word came from but im sure it means "Lock" in various forms :]4. Why did you put it here, and not create a offical place for it? I actually find it hard to create a place for this, and plus, this is a very great place to be at, and i find it very nice to be here untill i can transfer all that i've done here to a nice home ![]() If you have any question or want a explanation, i would be very happy to answer
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| BaZul | Apr 27 2010, 02:37 AM Post #46 |
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Chapter Twenty Seven: The Basic Procedure - Jack Wakes up from his alarm clock. he lays on his bed after another sleepless night, with bloodshot eyes, and a tired expression following him in the early morning. he stands up and stretches out and prepares to head out on his first Operation. He gears up and takes his Assualt rifle and Pistol, taking ammunition and basic Medical equipment, he stops for a second, then takes a bottle of water and a piece of bread from yesterday's dinner, its still fresh... Jack thinks for a moment. He tighten the straps and then heads out, closing the door sliently so he wont bother others who sleep. He walks up to the entarance behind the facillity, and wait for the rest. after several minutes, they start to appear. Leeroy was the first to arrive, he was a good Acrobat and a great traceur* he was also the master of Hand-To-Hand combat in Jack's Team. He came sliding down a pipe from the Living quarter's roof, he was geared with light armor and a Sub-Machine gun, his usual fare. after him came David, the Team's Sniper, he came from a hiding spot near plantlife in the other side equipped with his trusty Sniper Rifle and an Automatic pistol. Then, from a distance, Joey appears, geared up with a Shotgun, Sub-Machine Gun and a Pistol, the Planner of the squad, the leader of the operation, telling everyone to rally beside him a few steps from Jack. - Joey: " Allright everyone, nice to see you all here today, this isent the biggest mission we are on today, but its still important non the less. We are heading out to a Double U** Outpost, they hold infromation we need, I dont have a map of the outpost, only its basic location, we will have to observe and check for ourselves if we want to go in, take our Intel and go out silently, if everything will go according to plan, we wont need to kill too many men. David, you stay ready for my signal once we get there, you are our Recon. You will also lead Leeroy inside the facillity. Leeroy, you are the Scout on this run. Jack and me will be the firepower, i'll be more of a 'brute' while Jack will be more tactical, we will come in if anything troubles Leeroy to enter, or when he has problems once he enters, understood people? " - Everyone nodded, looking at eachother for a few seconds - Joey: " Allright, Leeroy, David, you know how to move in the squad... Jack, stay next to me. " - Joey claps his hands and then directs everyone to follow him as he leaves from the entarance they were at, David starts running the the building's walls from the left of the entire squad, observing while hidden in small plantlife for enemies away And following Jack and Joey, while Leeroy capes the rooftops and buildings, following Jack and Joey's movement. - ***MEANWHILE*** - As Din works on his desk, someone knocks on the door, Din looks up and sees a messanger - Din: " Yes? " Messanger: " Someone people are here to see you, sir. " Din: " Then send them right in. " - Din stops his current work and waits for them to enter, Three well-armed people enter the room, Two go to each side, while one heads and sits in the chair in the other end of Din's Table. - Man: " Nice to finally meet you, Din. " Din: " Excuse me? How do you know my name and most importantly, Who are you? " Embassador: " Im a Embassador from The Union, Much like Your Brotherhood, and we seek freidnship... and more. " Din: " How, and Why should I trust you people? " Embassador: " We hold knowladge, of the place you seek to enter. " - Din looks at t he embassador with observing eyes, trying to figure out the man's past and loyalties. - Din: " Allright... I'm listening... " End of Chapter Twenty Seven *Traceur - Traceur or Traceus is a Male or Female that practices "The Art of Parkour" **Double U - Firstly ment to be U.U.U, now changed to Double U (or U.U in spelling) for non-important reasons, The Double U Stands for "Universl Union". |
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| BaZul | May 1 2010, 02:14 AM Post #47 |
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Allright, New News; 1. Im going to work harder on the chapters in making them longer and more detailed, and more and more better ![]() 2. My other stories are going on well! I will tell you peeps when one of them is done! ((The Sceneries and others If you read "One does not simply make a webcomic" thread.)) I'm saying to you right now that you will need STEAM and GARRY'S MOD 10 in order to be able to see some of them. 3. Even though Im having some tests in the time being, it wont stop me from allowing you to enjoy my fiction so even if things are slightly delayed, dont worry.Also; I dont really have a steady schedule for posting a new chapter, But it can take up to several days, or several weeks. 4. The Machinima ((MuziX Effect, if you read the "One does not simply make a Webcomic" Thread.)) Is on complete hold and stored away untill means are avilable. 5. I will create a small FAQ/Infromation place for all your Knowladge regarding the fiction, so you will understand what will happen. and once the story is over, I will hope everyone that reads it enjoyed it ![]() That day aint so far away, hopefully ![]() Oh yeah, it aint so far away because Im now making the chapters MUCH MUCH MUCH longer, mostly consisting 2 or 3 predicted chapters, and thus taking much longer to finish. ENJOY! PS; For those readers out there, if you want to know how it is like to be in The Void (and being on the chair), go over Here and go to 00:24. |
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| BaZul | May 18 2010, 01:46 PM Post #48 |
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Chapter Twenty Eight: When Worlds Collide - David is on a large building, away from a small outpost in the middle of an empty street, observing the entire outpost with his sniper rifle. David told Leeroy to move as he saw the guard heading back inside, Jack and Joey were on the other side, moving slowly to the facillity. - David: " Wait, stop. " - David said in thaier radio quietly with a concerned voice as where the first guard went away, came back three. - David: " Could they have spotted us? they tripled thaier defences. " Joey: " Impossible, we are camouflaged and arent close enoff, we are moving up. " David: " Allright. " - Leeroy was allready in one of the rooftops, waiting for Jack and Joey to be in the street as the outpost, Leeroy then went forward from roof to roof, carefully and silently, as Jack and Joey moved on the roads from wall to wall to the outpost. Once leeroy was 2 roofs away from the outpost, he stopped, signaled David to watch over. Jack and Joey wer waiting for any suprise as Leeroy began the mission and started to infeltrate. Leeroy took out a guard silently to allow Jack and Joey to be avilable when Leeroy needed, and then he went inside. - Joey: " Jack, listen up... " - Joey said silently and directly. - Joey: " This aint a regular Search and Collect mission, we are searching for something way larger than you and me, even this whole group. Its how The U.U got here, and what do they want that we can use to our advantage. I dident tell David and Leeroy because the cover-up mission is still a mission. Come with me. " - Joey took afew steps inside, then told Jack to wait, and took out his radio and threw it on the ground, then stomped on it. - Joey: " You do it too, quickly. " - Jack looked at Joey in this weird situation, attempting to understand it completly, but meanwhile, Jack did as told and destroyed the radio. They went into the strange complex, much larger inside than outside, and after quick turns and long silent runs in hallways, Joey stopped infront of a corner leading to another room. - Joey: " Ok, You got in and take any infromation you can find and... " - Joey's words were interuppted when suddenly a sniper rifle shot was heard, Leeroy was in trouble, and David risked his location. - Joey: " Go! Go now! we dont have much time! " - Jack went through the corner, and stopped several steps away from the door, Gunfire was heard in the upper floor, from many guns and weapons of many kinds. Jack took a step Shouts of agony and pain was heard echoing through the outpost as if it was behind him and another sniper rifle shot is heard. And another step Bodies falling was thumping above Jack's head, Footsteps become slower and fainted, Leeroy was dieing, and another sniper rifle shot was heard, but closer. Jack was infront of the door, his heartbeat grows stronger each second that passes, he places his hand on the handle, the world slows down, but the sounds are still fast and wicked. As Jack entered the room and closed the door, the sounds stopped, infront of him was a really small room with just a desk with a computer on it, a shelf screwed into the wall and a chair. Water marks are on the wall, the room seems as if rotting. Jack went closer to the desk, and sat on the chair, turning the computer on and browsing through the files in it. His eyes became widened from suprise... and fear. It was The Brotherhood, they allowed the Universal Union to gain rulership over the world, and for once cause... for Subject H41-KA50. Jack knew, Jack knew it was him, they doomed the earth in order to have a chance to save it later. That moment, the moment Jack understood he is in the future, the future he was part in causing and was partly responsible for, he became unlocked. The emotions and feelings, the thoughts and beliefs, the hear and mind opened to the world, he understood, he understood the game The Haikasho was playing, he knew the role he was playing, he knew what is The Brotherhood, he knew the reason he is stuck in this world, he now possesed the true power The Haikasho made. But what does he do now? with all he knows what is to become of him? and The Brotherhood, but then, he came up with an Idea... - Joey: " Jack! Hurry up! " - Joey said while firing at U.U Soliders that are heading thaier way, he went to the door and opened it... - Joey: " Jack, Comeon, wakeup!... Jack? " - Jack was gone, in the seat was just Bright White smoke and the computer was shot at, and as Joey turned, the soliders were ready to go for the kill - **Meanwhile** Din: " So you know about The Void? " Ambassador: " More than you can ever presume. " Din: " And what do you want in return " Ambassador: " Partial Controll over The Brotherhood. " - Din looks at the Ambassador for a moment and sighs - Din: " Well, I guess under these conditions... " - The Ambassador makes a small smile when all of a sudden and knock on the door is heard - Din: " Come in. " - the messanger was there, he was carrying a small batch of papers crumpled in his hand, he was breathing heavily even though he knocked instead of rushing in - Din: " Yes? " Messanger: " We... We Found... " Din: " Speak up. " Messanger: " We... Found Volture... " End of Chapter Twenty Eight |
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| BaZul | May 29 2010, 08:24 AM Post #49 |
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Chapter Twenty Nine: Crossroads of Fate - Din looks at the messanger with shock in his eyes, the ambassador looks at them both, one after another in an observing watch. - Din: " He is found? where is he? " Messasger: " He is heading to the main lobby, comeon! " Din: " Allright, ambassador, come with me. " Ambassador: " Fine. " - Din quickly gets up as the messanger runs away back from where he came, Din exits the room, and then the ambassador stands up, and then takes out 2 Knives from the belt, hidden to the eye. The bodyguards dont seem to follow, but just head to the other exit rather than with the ambassador. As Din and the Ambassador reach the staircase that leads to the main lobby below, a large crowd is seen there, the scene seems to run slowly, as in slowed down, and then from the main entarance comes Volture. He dosent seem to hold alot of physical wounds on him, but it is clear that he went through hell and back. Din is amazed to see him alive, even larger than he was before, almost like he was reborn, everyone in the crowd cheer to his return, and then Volture raises his head upwards toward Din and the Ambassador. Volture looks carefully at the ambassador, and he sees that the ambassador is reaching backwards towards the first knife, Volture is shocked and starts running through the crowd, Din is confused, and the knife is all the way up, preparing to launch down a stab on Din as he turns back and watchs in pure confusion of the events, Volture is running up the stairs, all things go into extreme slowmotion, and the knife is slowly heading towards Din's chest, Din closes his eyes, preparing for the blow... suddenly he stops. The scene returns into normal speed, Volture is allready by Din and the ambassador, and the knife is stopped about 2 Centimetres from Din's heart. everyone stands still, all shocked of the events, awaiting to see how it will end, the ambassador is trying hard to push the knife down, but he cant, something is blocking him. The knife is then dropped on the ground as the ambassador's hand opens, and slowly a hand is appeard holding the ambassador's wrist. the hand hand slowly forms up to an arm, then a torso, legs, and other arm, and finally the head. The head of Jack, who appeard holding the wrist of the Ambassador, Jack looks in the ammassador's eyes, and his hand lights up in a pure, bright light, slowly manifesting the ambassador and then he vanishes in the same white smoke as Jack did. Everyone's eyes are focused on Jack, who is now the center of attention once again. - Din: " Jack? How did you get here? and how did you do that? " Whispered Din to Jack Jack: " I have alot to tell you. " - Jack looks at Volture, and Volture looks at him. They both lightly smile to eachother. - Jack: " Comeon, we have alot of things to do. " - Jack starts walking down the stairs, and Din and Volture follow him, and the crowd is slowly starting to fade, some heading back to thaier duties. - Din: " My god, this is one of the best things i've ever seen, two mircales in second. " Volture: " So it seems... So it seems. " Jack: " Din, I understand that you allready have an attack plan, correct? " Din: " Huh? How do you know about... " Jack: " Am I correct or not? " Din: " No, You are not correct, we dont have a decent plan because we dont know where the hell we are going. " Volture: " You mean The Void? " Din: " Yes, I mean The Void, where else? " Jack: " Its allright, we still have time to make a plan of attack, Firstly we need to recap on Volture's tale, then we can continue. " - They all head to the War Room, which is now completly empty. the war room is very large, consisting a extremely large, detailed map of the entire world, which was used currently to track down whereabouts of Jack and Volture. Din and Volture sat down next to eachother, turning to Jack who was still standing. - Jack: " Allright Volture, please tell us what happened to you in the past weeks. " - Volture cleared his throat and nodded - After the explosion back in the house, i woke up next to its ruins, but things seemed diffarant. When I went back to The Brotherhood, i found out that the entire city has been abandoned and demolished extensivly. I went to the nearest, highest place, and looked around, the only thing clearly visable was a large tower, colored Deep Blue, so i headed to it. I sneaked inside the city with the tower, and everywhere i seen was Decay and Propaganda, of some group named "Universl Union". I decided to help that place before i will return back to the brotherhood. Things were so diffarent, its like i was uncounches and unfound for centuries. As i went close to the tower, right before entering a large siren was heard, and I ran out of there as millions of soliders ran out from the tower, helicopters from the roofs and ACPs drove all about, but i dident give up, i did all i could to hlep the people against thaier rulership, but it dident work. I left the city, knowing there was absolutly no way to help those people any further. Jack: " Seems like you were in the same place as I was. " Volture: " Possibly, anyways; As i went through the country side, which seemed scourched from war and soaked with blood. I went days in the horror of the world outside the cities, and saw things unimaginable, but then i saw something strange... It was some sort of Gateway, a Black Hole on the surface of the earth, hidden in plain site, in an ancient sanctuary ruins, and i presumed it was my ticket out of the hellhole and back to the brotherhood. And as i went inside, things seemed strange the entire place was black, nothing could be seen, as i was closing my eyes forever. but then, a figure, a man came from the abyss, he was wearing a black suite with a almost expresionless face. Because as I said my name, Volture, he smiled, and said his name was Manica. - Jack wides his eyes in amazement, being thankful it wasent someone else. - He told me about the place, The Void, and then showed me the way back to this world. But then i was struck in the head, I felt sharp pain in the back of my head, and 3 more men like Manica showed up. They kept me there and took manica, leaving one of them with me. I was tortured there for.. I dont know how long... but then, suddenly a White Light flashed on the room, and went back to the black of The Void. Suddenly, i saw another one of them showing up, it was Once again Manica. He went to the other man, and fought him untill he vanished in Black Smoke. Manica quickly rushed me to the exit, and i left from there, he was still there, though. And then i found myself back where i was before, In the ruined house, but now it was still on fire and the remanents kept falling from the sky. Jack wasent there, though. So i went back here, where to the brotherhood. Din: " Fine Tale. " Jack: " Indeed, but its not now time to judge stories. " Volture: " Correct. " Jack: " Wa have no time to spare, Din, I have an Idea, A Plan of attack. " Din: " Raelly? what is your Plan? " Jack: " We will attack The Haikasho from the Sanctuary's entarance, We will all go in together and attack them, they cant take all of us, especially not now that im not with them anymore. " Din: " You mean... " Jack: " Yes, I am no longer in thaier controll, im Unlocked. I have seen in the place where i was all that happened in old archives. How The Universal Union came up from The Brotherhood, How You and Volture Died, How I died... and how they took over The Haikasho. " Din: " You arent planning on... " Jack: " Yes, I am. " Volture: " This is outrageous! You cant do that! " Jack: " We have no other way. " Din: " There has to be. " Jack: " Well, we dont really have time to ponder on solutions, we have to act, NOW! " Din: " You're right. Volture, can you remember the whereabouts of The Sanctuary? " Volture: " Yes, but it will be hard. " Din: " Why? " Volture: " When the Sharp Pain was felt, i started losing memory of my life, and i still am. The closer we will reach our victory, the closer I will be left without personallity. " Din: " Then we move out now. " Jack: " Rally The Brotherhood, its time. " Din: " Wait... the ENTIRE Brotherhood? " Jack: " The Small Squad you sent with you dident work. " - Din was confused in Jack's Response, but understood and nodded, Din left the room and went on to Rally the Brotherhood. - Volture: " What will I do? " Jack: " We will need you at all costs, you stick with Din and tell him that I am ORDERING him to protect you. " Volture: " Allright. " - Volture stood up and ran to Din, As he left the room, Jack Sighed and went to the chair and closed his eyes to relax and try and make his headache to fade away. - End of Chapter Twenty Nine |
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| BaZul | Jun 28 2010, 12:47 PM Post #50 |
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FICTION REVAMPED - NOW WITH ACTUAL FICTION WRITING LIKE ZE PROS!!! Chapter Thirty Part One: The Sanctuary's Gateway Jack, Din, Volture and Rayne stood infront of an extremly old ruin, Green and Brown vines are growing over the walls and broken pillars, Behind the four stood a large group of men, all equiped with armour and weaponry. Jack wore his old attire from when he served for The Haikasho, Volture wore his new gear that he hand- picked before they went off to the ruin, so did Rayne. Only Din remained with his old equipment, ever since him and Jack met. "How do we open this gateway?" Din asked Volture. "There was this doorway, which I triggered to appear" Volture said as he kept losing his memories, Din looked at Jack and nodded to him, Jack nodded back. Jack started looking around as he made steps forward into The Sanctuary, all eyes wer on him as he looked around and examined The Sanctuary. "Found anything?" Din asked out loud "No, I think it aint a physical activation..." Din Raised his eyebrow for a second, "What do you mean? then how did Volture open the gateway?" Rayne looked at Volture, then Din and returned to the scene. Jack raised his hand slightly and it started to glow white and searched with his hand in the air for some sort of trigger. Jack's hand suddenly stops in midair as it bumps into something, Jack holds his hand on it, and the white glow slowly forms with the invisible object, to form a medium-sized stand with a small pressure plate on the top of it. Jack pushes inwards the Pressure plate, and the ruin slightly shakes underground. A Blink of light appears infront of the entire group, all in awe as the portal opens slowly. Jack steps back and returns besides Din and Rayne. "So you are sticking with your plan?" Din asked Jack Silently "I have to, unless there is a better idea, which we dont have, there dosent seem to be any other way." Jack replied. "So what are you going to do?" Din asked Jack silently "Just so I'll be sure." "Im going to be Them, to take thaier rule. To Become The Haikasho itself." End of Chapter Thirteen Part One |
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| BaZul | Jun 30 2010, 02:15 AM Post #51 |
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Chapter Thirty Part Two: The Time has Come And so they stood, silent and stiff infront of the portal gateway to The Void, the place that no one ever went there at will and freely, ready to begin thaier assualt on The Haikasho. "I still dont think its a good idea" Whispered Din, "I know, but there really aint a choice" Jack replied in a whisper aswell. "Maybe there is..." Volture said to them, "If you can take thaier place, maybe you can destroy them entirely." he continued Din, Jack and Volture looked at one another, "It can be possible, allthough it will be extremly fatal." Jack said to Volture "What do you mean, Fatal?" Din asked Jack before Volture gotten the chance. "The Haikasho created many realms of the same world, each for every diffarent decision made, destroying them will also destroy all the realms. " Jack answered, "It will destroy this world and all the rest... Best case scenario is that only one realm survives and all decisions made are final and premanent. " he finished. Rayne sighed and took a step forward and turned around to thaier direction "Guys, the more we stall the more they have the time to prepare against us, we must act now or else we will never be able to." "He is right" Said Volture "Now its time to head on to The Void and let Jack achieve the things we thrive for Decades" They all stepped forward except Jack and glanced at the Gateway, and then they looked and waited for Jack, He took a deep breath and nodded. "Its time." |
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| BaZul | Jul 26 2010, 04:51 AM Post #52 |
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Chapter Thirty Part Three: The Invisible War And so, each and every member of The Brotherhood went threw the portal, where the Four Leaders, Rayne, Din, Jack and Volture, entered first. As the entire army of men and women slowly decreased as they went inside, some dident want, some decided to stay and hold the legacy or protect that end of the gateway, but in thaier hearts they were afraid. The four looked around, they ended up in the same location, only something was diffarent. There were no plants or wildlife, the sky was grey-red and it was colder, much much colder. The army slowly appeared from the gateway into the destroyed world, observing it with awe and amazment, and even with extreme fear. "What...What is this place? What happened? This isent The Void!" Rayne said, slowly in a louder and angerier voice, "Relax, Rayne. We are just in a diffarent realm, as I said, we are in the same world, only where a diffarent decision has been made, and I can see that decision wasent really a good one" Jack replied. "Then how do we get to The Void?" Din asked Jack, "I think I know a way." Jack pointed into the Horizon, a huge destroyed tower standed above the entire landscape, fremilliar to the one used by the U.U "I remember that tower, and I belive its our ticket to The Void." said Jack to the rest, puting his finger down and moving closer to the other Three. "Its going to be a long walk, but by the looks of this place, I dont think we will be having much of a problem to get there." Jack continued "You are right, it wont be, but I guess Im now useless" Volture said to them, continuing "I dont remember anything else other than that large tower, My memory is blank now, I guess I will now return back to our World, await for the results of this mission." They nodded and letted Volture go back through the gateway, feeling as if he just died infront of them. "Come on, we need to start walking." Jack said and began to walk to the direction of the tower. Din and Rayne started to Rally The Brotherhood with them and began walking alongside Jack. The more they got closer, the worse it seemed around, remenants of death and destruction was all around, and the weirder it felt. Strange cold was felt, but also combined with heat, something unusual for every one of them. They were close to the city, crumbeling highways appeared to lead them into the city, abandoned cars in great numbered were on the highways, all with shattered windows and rust eating theough the paint and metal. The tires and rims were taken, destroyed or otherwise useless, and soon the found thaier way in the entarance to the city. It was unbeliveable, they all stared at its content with shock and awe, Corpses and Disintigrating skeletons were everywhere, blood washed over the entire city streets, scorches on the bodies and buildings and streets from bombings and rusting weaponry on the ground, No one was spared from the horror that went through the city. Some of the soliders couldent handle what they seen and sat down, feeling large sorrow and trauma. Jack looked back at them, the faces of sadness and fear and even fake courage some of them showed to hide thaier real feeling. Jack sighed and raised his hand slightly, "Take a small rest, you walked a long way, We leave in a few minutes." Everyone tried to calm eachother down right when he finished the sentance, only Din and Rayne stayed along with Jack. "What kind of army did we make?" said Rayne, "We trained them to handle worst cases, and yet they brake down by just seeing these kind of things, where they are trained to do so." Rayne clenched his fist. 'Rayne, you cant blame them for not being used to it." Din replyed to Rayne's comment. "You can be trained to be the best in every situation, though when you really are in that situation, its never enough and you'll allways end up going through something you were trained to avoid." Jack responded to both, Rayne sighed and Din crossed his arms, observing the depressed and distressed memebers. "Allright, Lets go everyone!" Din shouted at them to return thaier way to the tower. A Strange howel was heard when everyone got up, right before they took the first step. "We got Ourselves some guests!" A Man shouted, the same voice was heard like the howel. Everyone took thaier weapons up, searching for the hidden man, Suddenly, a large wave of men, covered in blood and makeshift gear from junked parts stormed out of thaier hiding, carrying rusted pistols and knives and other sorts of items that they used as weapons. The Brotherhood started firing at them all, more and more of the strange attackers kept appearing, But they standed no match against The Brotherhood's army. Every single one of them died, except one, who dropped his knife and ran away shouting for help, never so scared before, he kept shouting that "The Army is here to kill us all!" as he dissolved into the background of the ruined city. The sky started to grow more red than grey, and The Brotherhood, aswell as Jack, Din and Rayne walked over the bodies and continued along towards the direction to the tower. The bloodbath that happened was strange, for some reason it dident show up and it blended with the rest of the corpses, as if they died long time ago instead of seconds before. The stench of the older bodies only then was noticeable, unbearable, yet they continued along towards the center of the city, towards the tower. End of Chapter Thirteen Part Three |
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| MakoVlazkov | Aug 6 2010, 01:31 AM Post #53 |
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OH HEY! i followed the link on your steam profile, fell through a wormhole, got sucked into a new dimension, i then conquered that dimension and requisitioned a device capable of sending me back to earth with access to this forum, and so i am here, and this doesnt seem like something you would write, but then again i only know you on a gmod server, so i guess my knowledge of the inner workings of your creativity is a bit lacking, in any case, i now have an account on a forum for no other reason to read a fiction wrote by a dude in israel i know on steam, hmmm, all while not sleeping, you have a pretty good story here, I APPROVE. |
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| BaZul | Aug 6 2010, 02:12 AM Post #54 |
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MAY-KOE!!! =DD WHAZZAP DAWG?! Anyways; for those who wish to understand the weird posts: Mako is a friend of mine in Steam, and he dident sleep at all and for some reason hyperactive from it, so he just went into my Steam Community page (Which has a link to this exact thread) and Shoop-Da-Whoop he has an account here ![]() Though as he said he is prolly just doing it to read my fiction, so yeah. Pay no Regard to the post
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| BaZul | Aug 7 2010, 10:49 AM Post #55 |
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Chapter Thirty One: Rust & Dust The Brotherhood Army stood at the gates of the large tower in the decayed city, observing how the tower seems just to begin to ruin. The gates were half-way open and broken, so they could freely enter, but sounds kept comeing from and near the tower, sounds of metal screeches and rust particles and dirt falling and hitting the ground, as millions of Tiny feet walking on the metal floor The entire interiors of the tower is dark, dank and cold, abandoned and beginning to crumble, Din stopped Jack for aswell as everyone, and turned to the rest. "Everyone! assemble the camp and assemble you're squads! We are going to make the encampment at the gates of the tower and prepare for Operation Exodus! Spread the word across the other soliders who dident hear! Rayne will be handing out Orders, Volture will assist Rayne so talk to him when Rayne is unavilable! Me and Jack will Scout the inside of the tower! Hop to it!" Din said to the soliders of The Brotherhood who could hear him, and everyone went to thaier duties. Jack went inside with Din, hearing the echo's of the noise behind them weaving forward deep inside the tower, the feeling of the abandoned tower is haunting to whoever enters it, as for some reason it seemed to be holding the entire effects of everything that happened. "Its too dark, I cant see anything, let me just find my flare..." Din said to Jack, searching for his Flare in his gear, then Jack stopped him and placed his hand, creating a colorless flame arise from the palm of his hand, leading the way in the abandoned tower. "You know, This is the same kind of tower as the one I was held in when I was in the other... universe." Jack said as they walked in the metal hallways. The walls are filled with pipework and malfunctioning electric wires, some hidden inside and some revealed and hanging, Dust and dirt seem to cover the entire place, and sometimes plates on the ceiling and pipes collapse from the rust that ate through the supports, making a large clong sound of metal hitting metal as they crash to the floor. "This place seems so old.. yet so... advanced..." Din remarked as they continued through the hallways, the more they went inside the more it seems colder and sinister than what it seemed upfront, where even upfront it looked devious and sinister as it is. "Hey... Jack." Din asked him as they continued walking, "Yes?" Jack responded, looking at him. "Do you know anything about your past? like... before you worked with.. er.. for them?" Din asked Jack, and they stopped walking as Jack stopped and took a second to think. "You know... I think I will never know." and he started walking again, and Din following him towards the infinite hallways and levels in the tower. Meanwhile, outside the tower the Army is in the first stages on making the camp, Rayne directing the soliders on setting up the tents and the squads, where Volture makes sure his orders are being followed correctly, Someone suddenly appears in the horizon from the gates, running towards the camp. "Sir! Someone is approaching!" yelled the lookout to his superior, who started running towards Volture, who was the first to see. Huffing as he told Volture on the man. "Volture, Sir, My lookout has spotted a man approaching the camp, what shall we do?" he asked. "I'll handle it." said Volture and went outisde the camp towards the running man, He was wearing a mask and hood so none could identify him. "Hold it right there!" Shouted Volture at the man, and he slowly stopped from running and walked slowly to Volture, having no referance to be exhausted from his run. "Identify yourself." Said Volture when the man was infront of him. The man folded his hood back and took his mask off, revealing to be Joey, "I have an extremely urgent message of Jack." he said to Volture. "How do you know that name? Who are you?!" Volture asked Joey, raising his voice. "My name is Joey, I have searched for Jack for many years as we were teammates, and he vanished, I survived the attack that ran into us, well, me when he disappeared, And I found alot in my searches for him, it is vital that I'll speak with him!" Joey responded, eagerly awaiting for an answer, though sadly fearing his plea will be declined. "He is currently inside, though if he worked with you as you claim, then I suppose it'll be ok to hold you untill he returns." Volture said with a small, hiding smile, "Thank you very much." Joey said, following Volture into the camp. End of Chapter Thirty One |
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